Toxic's Characters

Name: Ashten Elkwood
Age/Birthday: 12 Years Old
Gender: Male
District: 12
Family: Orphaned, lives in the seam with big brother
Brief History: Ashten, Is a young But mature kid. He lives to protect his big brother
who has been scarred for life. When his Parents were murdered by Two peacekeepers
for leaving the district and hunting, Ashten went to the woods and found his mom's bow
and learned how to hunt . He wants to start a rebellion again, but everyone thinks he's
Crazy, except Alexis Chesternut...
Physical Appearance: He has Long Dark Brown hair, That shines At night When the moon is out. Dark Olive skin.
Cloudy Gray Eyes. And he is 5"3(5 ft 3 in) tall.
Personality: Ashten Has ADHD So, he can't stay still too long. Ashten Is a determined young boy
HE wants to get in the games and win them to start another rebellion. He wants The nation of panem
to be free ,Where there is no right or wrong, with no laws. He wants the president snow to step down from his power , so someone will not be arrested for hunting, or killed for bringing Game back to the town.
Flaw: ADHD, Can't stay still.
Pets: A Wolf Puppy,That lives in the woods
Rich or Poor?: Poor
Weapon of Choice: Bow and arrow
Talents: Energetic,and sings good.
Preferred Angles : Hostile, Mysterious, Silent .
Angles this tribute will not do: Sexy, Cute, Talkative, I could say more but.....
Other:He can climb up trees REAL easily.
This Character is HIGHLY Based On me, So no I'm not taking bow and arrows and that stuff
from Katniss!

Name: Alexis Chesternut
Age/Birthday: 12
Gender: Female
District: 12
Family: Mother: Amy Chesternut, Father: Deceased.
Brief History: She Was adopted by the butcher and is now Ready for anything.
Physical Appearance: Curly long brown hair, pale white skin, Sky blue eyes, 4"11(4 Ft 11 In) Tall
Personality: Alexis is a Nice Pretty Girl With a little French accent Who likes Seam boys especially Ashten.
Flaw: Distracted Easily
Pets: NONE
Rich or Poor?: Rich
Weapon of Choice: Sword
Talents: Singing, Dancing, Running
Preferred Angles Innocent, Sexy, Nice
Angles this tribute will not do : Mean, Hostile, mysterious
Other: Alexis is based on my Girlfriend, all you need to know.

Okay, for each Character, History, Appearance, and personality all need to be at least four sentences. And for Ashton, his flaw isn't really a flaw.

'Can't use axes to well.'
A flaw is more of something that could lead you to your doom. Like, I've been thinking latly, and one of my biggest flaws(i have many) is that I put to much things on my plate that I can't do. I've got a hard time saying no, so that mean's I get stressed kind of easily.

Fix those things, and then I can accept them :3

Ok Thanks For telling Me ill Fix that

Can you guys Check out toxic? See if he's good?

His flaw is okay now, but both of them need to have at least 4 sentences for History, Appearance, and Personality, not just Ashten. Alexis's personality doesn't actually say anything about who she is, is just says she's nice. Also, pretty isn't a behavioral trait. Sorry, it's a pet peeve of mine when people describe a physical attribute in the personality section. Still, though. Alexis has to have some other purpose in life than liking Ashten, right?