Kait's Characters

Name: Lottie Arden
Age/Birthday: Sixteen, May 11th.
Gender: Female
District: District 4
Rich or Poor: Poor
Weapon Of Choice: Spear
Physical Appearance: Lottie is five foot three. She has long red hair and she is covered in freckles from head to toe. She uses a spear to catch her food, so she is fit. She has a bright blue left eye, and a soft green right eye.
Personality: Lottie is a head strong, independent girl. But her inability to sense danger will be her fatal flaw. She's innocent, shy, and mysterious. She's also very quiet and sweet.
Flaw: Lottie is innocent and sweet, but has no sense of danger. In her eyes, nothing can hurt her.
Talents: Can spear a fish in one swing with a spear. She can sing. Lottie can track animal prints.
Family: Lottie has just one little brother. The rest of her family drowned in a boating accident four years prior.
Pets: None
Brief History: When Lottie was only twelve, her mother and father drowned in a boating accident, leaving her to fend for her little brother, who was only two at the time, and herself. She taught herself how to fish with a spear, and works at the local pier to help buy extra things. Her brother, Eridan, stays at home with one of Lottie's friends. She works all day to provide for the five year old.
Preferred Angles: Lottie will work the angle of innocence until it's dead in the ground. Her background and slight ignorance helps with that.
Angles this tribute will not do: Sexy. Lottie has no desire to portray herself as a sex symbol in the capitol
Token: A necklace her father gave to her mother.
Other:

Hi kait, welcome to the site! I know we don't seem to active right now, but we're working on a site event to spice things up That being said, Lottie's looking good, there's just a few things that need to be done before I can approve her!

Your second sentence under personality isn't a complete sentence (Hint, just get rid of the "but" and it should be good) Aaaand looking at it again, there's not much else to change, so just do that and she should be fine!