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Natalie Black

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General

Name: Natalie Black

Age/Birthday: 12 currently, birthday: 24th September.

Gender: Female

District: 12

Rich or Poor: Poor

Weapon Of Choice: Bow and Arrow

Physical Appearance: Dark brown hair and rich brown eyes. Really short, even for her age, but she is only 12.

Personality:Natalie is quite fun and funny and she has a quirky, loving attitude. She is really good at getting her hopes up and can easily be crushed. She isn't very good at taking news. She can be a good actor and is good at keeping secrets, but only when it is vital.

Flaw: Natalie is very sensitive, but she doesn't show it. She gets crushed at anything and is a bit of a cry baby.

Talents: Bow and Arrow shooting, Acting, and intelligence.

Family/History

Family: Twin sister called Natalia, another sister names Caitlyn, and an older brother named Lakelyn, plus her Dad.

Pets: None.

Brief History: Her mother died when she was young because she got sick. Natalia and her didn't cope very well with it. She goes hunting with her father to keep the family going a lot, who has taught her everything she knows about nature and healing things.

Others

Preferred Angles: Smart, Innocent, Cute, and Nice.

Angles this tribute will not do: Sexy, Bloodthirsty, Enthusiastic.

Token: Her mothers ring.

Physical Appearance needs 2 more sentences~

Brief History needs 1 more sentence. Also, the history seems a little bit too much like Katniss and what her and her father used to do so if you could change that somehow. Thanks

Family section needs to be filled out also.

Other than that, looking pretty nice so far.

General

Name: Natalie Black

Age/Birthday: 12 currently, birthday: 24th September.

Gender: Female

District: 12

Rich or Poor: Poor

Weapon Of Choice: Bow and Arrow

Physical Appearance: Dark brown hair and rich brown eyes. Really short, even for her age, but she is only 12. She has pale skin and usually wears her hair in a neat braid. She usually has a little bit of dirt and mud on her.

Personality:Natalie is quite fun and funny and she has a quirky, loving attitude. She is really good at getting her hopes up and can easily be crushed. She isn't very good at taking news. She can be a good actor and is good at keeping secrets, but only when it is vital.

Flaw: Natalie is very sensitive, but she doesn't show it. She gets crushed at anything and is a bit of a cry baby.

Talents: Bow and Arrow shooting, Acting, and intelligence.

Family/History: Mother died of an illness and she only has her father left... Below V

Family: Twin sister called Natalia, another sister names Caitlyn, and an older brother named Lakelyn, plus her Dad.

Pets: None.

Brief History: Her mother died when she was young because she got sick. Natalia and her didn't cope very well with it. She goes hunting with her Dad as she enjoys it, he has taught her everything she knows about healing and animals and she now has pretty good aim with her bow and arrow, but still feels no pleasure for killing animals. She writes a story about her life and hopes she will live to complete it.

Others

Preferred Angles: Smart, Innocent, Cute, and Nice.

Angles this tribute will not do: Sexy, Bloodthirsty, Enthusiastic.

Token: Her mothers ring.

^You already have her posted.

That one is my edited one, I had to change/add a few things

there is an edit button in the top right of all your posts, you can use it to edit them.

Okay, well is my character accepted?

Natalie is Accepted

Although she is very similar to Katniss XD

Haha thank you I try to make her different...

Name: Marina Beach

Age/Birthday: 16 currently, birthday is 7th July

Gender: Female

District: 4

Rich or Poor: Poor

Weapon Of Choice: Knife

Physical Appearance: Long wavy blonde hair that reaches her hips, but she usually wears it in a pony tail. Deep aqua eyes with little flecks of green in them. Quite short for her age. Marina has ale skin.

Personality: Marina is a bubbly character and is usually quite obedient. She is intelligent when it comes to food and can read people just by looking at them. She is usually pretty quiet which makes her good at keeping secrets, but she has never been good at making friends. She can be quite protective over some people

Flaw: Marina gets offended easily and the littlest thing you say will make her run away and cry, she never cries in front of people though, as she knows that that will just make people call her a cry baby or something.

Talents: Marina is smart, good at keeping things to herself, and has good aim.

Family/History

Family: 18 year old sister, Oceania, no parents, but they get looked after by Gina.

Brief History: Oceania and Marina were put on the doorstep of Gina, who was apparently a friend of their parents, but Gina won't tell them anything about their parents. Gina has looked after them and they like her for that. Marina and Oceania don't really have any friends, only each other, so they aren't very well known. Oceania would do anything for Marina, and Marina would do anything for her.

Others

Preferred Angles: Innocent, Cute, Nice, Scared

Angles this tribute will not do: Sexy, Bloodthirsty, Enthusiastic.

Token: A necklace with a scallop shell on the end that was apparently her mothers.

For your apperance, 'quite short' and 'pale skin' aren't really sentences. Instead, you could make them 'She's short for her age' and 'Marina has pale skin'. Personality needs another sentence, but you can easily change one of the longer one's into a second sentence, or add something else. Also, history needs two more sentences.

Just fix those things up, and she can be accepted! Great character so far