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PostSubject: Tallix's characters   Tallix's characters Icon_minitimeSun Aug 12, 2012 12:26 pm

Tallix Meara, 16, district 4
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PostSubject: Re: Tallix's characters   Tallix's characters Icon_minitimeSun Aug 12, 2012 2:01 pm

First of all, welcome to the site! Smile I would just like to point out a few things about your character, but for the most part she looks great! There are a couple of sentences in the personality and appearance sections that are not complete, such as 'tall for her age,' which should be changed to 'she is tall for her age,' etc. as I'm sure you know how to do. Other than that, everything is fine. So... I'm going to go ahead and accept her in trust that you will change those little sentences, but do edit that, okay? Smile


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PostSubject: Re: Tallix's characters   Tallix's characters Icon_minitimeMon Aug 13, 2012 6:23 am

Opps, ok, I'll go and fix those now! Thanks for accepting her!
Can I make another character now as well?

Kai Oaken, 15, District 7
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PostSubject: Re: Tallix's characters   Tallix's characters Icon_minitimeMon Aug 13, 2012 5:02 pm

Same thing as last time in talents, but accepted.
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PostSubject: Re: Tallix's characters   Tallix's characters Icon_minitimeWed Aug 15, 2012 1:47 pm

Two characters this time

Tyler Parker, 17, district 2
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Avis Lykos, 12, District 11
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PostSubject: Re: Tallix's characters   Tallix's characters Icon_minitimeWed Aug 15, 2012 4:12 pm

Tyler and Avis are accepted! But, just a note. You said that Tyler had two brothers in his Family section, but then you said he had 3 in his history. He's still accepted though.
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