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Name:Luke Stevenson
Age/birthday: 16 October 5
Gender:male
District:3
Family: James Stevenson (deceased) Mary Stevenson (deceased) Tom Stevenson
Brief history: His brother tom was reaped for the 23d games and his father could not leave the familiy. Tom was murdered at the blood bath at the cornucopia. His mother was so depressed that she slit her own throat. In that action lukes father killed himself out of misery. This has made Luke into a unreasonable kid and out of sorrow he became an animal. He ran out into the wood sobbing in misery. He then found a wolf pack that became known to him as his family. He is easily one of the most savage people in district three. But if any major physical labor is required, the peacekeepers just call him
Physical appearance: has a medium build and and his chest is pushed outward to show he is domanant. He has a dark blond colored hair. He has blue eyes filled with hatred. Has a slight tan and likes to be outside.
Personality: he always thinks about death. Any time sometalks about him or his familliy he beats the hell out of them. People always see him outside and hardly inside. He likes to sleep and play with the wolfs. He has one person he loves its a girl that has always helped him through the hard times.
Flaw: in battle he only acts on rage and hate. And also instinct but he has made the choice to be a volenteer and maybe a career.
Pets: n/a
Rich or poor: poor
Weapon of choice: great sword
Talents very good in the woods. Great at controlling fire. Can hold any weapon. Throw up to 200 pounds
Preffered angles: intimidating and misunderstood poor boy
Angles he will not do: smart, non intimidating, non deppressed
Other: n/a

Seems Great, Loved to Roleplay sometime!

Throwing up to 600 lbs.? That sounds a little un-realistic.

ok i have changed it

You're sheet is fine however one thing you could try and do is expand your history and what not. It's fine now but it's rather choppy and doesn't explain a whole lot. Just next time try to aim your character sheet to explain it's self better.

There are two things I'd like you to fix if you could, Please? One, being the red eye thing. It's not natural to have red eyes and all the districts are probably too poor to be able to afford coloured contacts or something. Also 400lbs is still too much and a bit unrealistic, Maybe highest at 200 lbs but that's it, I'd say. I think 100lbs or 150 lbs would still be fairly impressive.

~Sorella

I edited it sor. Thanks for the help

Alright, thank you! (:

He's accepted.

how do i rp?

You create a topic(using your character in his district) ir you can reply to a topic thats already been posted. Because your character is in District three, it means you can only roleplay as him in Districr three. If you need more help, you can look at different topics that have already been posted.

Name: Jake Jones
Age/Birthday: 19 may 16
Gender:male
District:7
Family: Father( hames) Mother( jane) brother(albert)
Brief History: during the 25 hunger games jake was working in the lumber feilds with his brother. During the work day a malfunction happend and jakes brother was in the machinary cutter building. one of the blades came out of the machine and cut jakes brothers legs off. he and his familly were gratefull that he survived. but now he was no use in the lumber yards. he was left at home one day when a fire burst out in a raging frenzy his brother was burnt alive. the familly never got over it but moved forward.
Physical Appearance: 6,2 has a solid build on his whole body. Has a nice darkish tan from working in the sun. he has a nice dark brown light brown hair color. he has a healthy body with a very little fat(very skiny with muscles).
Personality: likes to be outside in the woods. can tell you about every kind of wood. easily makes food out of scraps. nice and hates to lie. very respectful.
Flaw: absessed with fire and sharp objects.
Pets:tamed wolf named lucky
Rich or Poor?: rich
Weapon of Choice: double bladed battle axe
Talents: can out run a deer, climbs any tree he can, can handle 200 pounds easily
Preferred Angles inocent, silent , shy and very kind
Angles this tribute will not do (Max. 3): pick fights, or attack without reason.
Other:

JJBoy, why don't you add this character to your character topic. It's much easier to look at your characters.

thanks may the odds forever be in your favor

Haha you too

so has my handsome man been accepted to prowl the streets of district seven?

jjboys charrie district 7

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Character Name:: luke stevenson
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Name: Jake Jones
Age/Birthday: 19 may 16
Gender:male
District:7
Family: Father( hames) Mother( jane) brother(albert)
Brief History: during the 25 hunger games jake was working in the lumber feilds with his brother. During the work day a malfunction happend and jakes brother was in the machinary cutter building. one of the blades came out of the machine and cut jakes brothers legs off. he and his familly were gratefull that he survived. but now he was no use in the lumber yards. he was left at home one day when a fire burst out in a raging frenzy his brother was burnt alive. the familly never got over it but moved forward.
Physical Appearance: 6,2 has a solid build on his whole body. Has a nice darkish tan from working in the sun. he has a nice dark brown light brown hair color. he has a healthy body with a very little fat(very skiny with muscles).
Personality: likes to be outside in the woods. can tell you about every kind of wood. easily makes food out of scraps. nice and hates to lie. very respectful.
Flaw: absessed with fire and sharp objects.
Pets:tamed wolf named lucky
Rich or Poor?: rich
Weapon of Choice: double bladed battle axe
Talents: can out run a deer, climbs any tree he can, can handle 200 pounds easily
Preferred Angles inocent, silent , shy and very kind
Angles this tribute will not do (Max. 3): pick fights, or attack without reason.
Other:


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Luke Stevenson, 16 , district 3

Okay, a few things I'd like you to edit. First off, please capitalize the first letter of each sentence. Second, things like "likes to be outside in the woods", "can out run a deer", and "6,2 has a solid build on his whole body" are not sentences. However, if you were to write "Jake likes to be outside in the woods.", "He can outrun a deer.", and "Jake is 6'2 and has a solid build on his whole body." are. Please change that. One last thing, could you write a tidbit about each family member? Just something like: Jane his mother looks example and has example job.

Lily, the height is supposed to be written as 6'2" not 6'2 Just thought I'd point that out. :3

(Also, get your butt on skype, Lil.)

sorry but is he a good charrie ?

Yeah! Just fix the stuff I told yah to and I will accept him if he looks good (:

what were those things?

Name: Jake Jones
Age/Birthday: 19 may 16
Gender:male
District:7
Family: Father( hames) is kind and playful Mother( jane) very bright and helpful brother(albert) very athletic
Brief History: During the 25 hunger games jake was working in the lumber feilds with his brother. During the work day a malfunction happend and jakes brother was in the machinary cutter building. one of the blades came out of the machine and cut jakes brothers legs off. he and his familly were gratefull that he survived. but now he was no use in the lumber yards. he was left at home one day when a fire burst out in a raging frenzy his brother was burnt alive. the familly never got over it but moved forward.
Physical Appearance:He is 6'2. jake has a solid build on his whole body and a nice darkish tan from working in the sun. he has a nice dark brown light brown hair color. he has a healthy body with a very little fat(very skiny with muscles).
Personality: Jake likes to be outside in the woods. can tell you about every kind of wood. easily makes food out of scraps. nice and hates to lie. very respectful.
Flaw: Absessed with fire and sharp objects.
Pets:Tamed wolf named lucky
Rich or Poor?: Rich
Weapon of Choice: Double bladed battle axe
Talents: He can out run deer, jake climbs any tree he can, can handle 200 pounds easily
Preferred Angles inocent, Silent , shy and very kind
Angles this tribute will not do (Max. 3): Pick fights, or attack without reason.
Other:


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Ok, that's great but you didn't capitalize some of the first letters of sentences. Also, 6'2". isn't a sentence. Could you change it to "Jake is 6'2"."? Also, could you change "Has a a solid build..." to "He has a solid..."? But, so far, your charrie is looking good (:

Accepted, I'll merge this into your character topic.

Gaz, he still hasn't changed the things I told him to.