MLsweetarts charries.

Posts : 20 Join date : 2011-02-23

Name: (First and Last):Archer Stewert
Age/Birthday:16/ August 10th
Gender:male
District:2
Family: (Mother, father, siblings [if any.]): A Dad, No mom and he has a twin sister Ryder and 3 younger siblings David, Noah and Conner.
Brief History: (Must be at least 4 sentences.): Archer was born in the second district. He lived with his dad and twin sister and younger siblings, His mom had died after his little siblings where born when he was 1. Archer always tried to help his family out. He also got into trouble alot.
Physical Appearance: (Must be at least 4 sentences.): Archer has dirty blond hair thats cut jaggedly and is uneven. He has one green eye and one blue eye. He is very tall 6'7'' and he is muscular. He wears a normal everyday outfit.
Personality: (Must be at least 4 sentences.):He is very outgoing at times. He can have a bad temper. He is very prideful at times. Also Archer can be a flirt.
Flaw: (At least 1):He has trust issues
Pets: None
Rich or Poor?:Rich
Weapon of Choice:A bow and arrows. or a spear.
Talents: (Must list at least three.)Weight lifting, Running, Archery
Other:None

Name: (First and Last):Maeve Hollaway
Age/Birthday:14/May 1st
Gender:female
District:10
Family: (Mother, father, siblings [if any.]):She has a father named Jacob, A Older brother Chrsitan and another older brother Gabriel her mom died when she was born.
Brief History: (Must be at least 4 sentences.): Maeve has a ok life, meaning it wasnt to bad but and it was pretty good at most times. She always had her brothers there to take care of her which was very helpful. When Maeve was 8 she found a small kitten which she named Granger and took in as a pet. Now Maeve is 12 and a hardworker.
Physical Appearance: (Must be at least 4 sentences.):Maeve has long dark brown hair, that she normaly wears in a ponytail so its out of her face. She has dark brown eyes. Maeve is around 5'4'' and fit/athletic looking. She always wears some sort of jacket and boots.
Personality: (Must be at least 4 sentences.):Maeve can be a fun loving girl at times. But if she has to be she can be hard working and dead serious at what she is doing. She however doesnt always follow the rules which doesnt always turn out good for her. Maeve also has this way where she can talk people into doing stuff for her.
Flaw: (At least 1):She can be slap happy at times, She has a issue about kicking people(Basicly she kicks people alot).
Pets: A kitten Granger, A Cow named Skyla.
Rich or Poor?:Rich
Weapon of Choice:A spear and a knife.
Talents: (Must list at least three.):Running, Art and singing.
Other:Nope

Subject: Re: MLsweetarts charries. Wed Feb 23, 2011 6:41 pm

Oh my god, SWEET.

Another district 2 character Very Happy

Subject: Re: MLsweetarts charries. Thu Feb 24, 2011 4:26 pm

Accepted.

Oh, Gaz, I'm trying to create a 2 charrie, but I'm to lazy to do so. xD

Subject: Re: MLsweetarts charries. Thu Feb 24, 2011 4:54 pm

try to make it a female, we have 2 guys now.

Also, I love the spongebob thing in your sig xD

Posts : 20 Join date : 2011-02-23

Name: (First and Last):Lalia Aslynn Nicolette Gabriella Reid
Age/Birthday:15/ April 13th
Gender:female
District:4
Family: (Mother, father, siblings [if any.]):Her dads name is Alan, Her mothers name is Gena, Her two older brothers whos names are Todd and Taylor and she has a brother Paul.
Brief History: (Must be at least 4 sentences.):Lalia was always known for her beauty and her brains. From a early age she was adored by tons of people. But besides that Lalia was very hard working. Lalia also had a thing for breaking rules.
Physical Appearance: (Must be at least 4 sentences.)Lalia has long dark brown hair. She has very pretty blue eyes. She is fit and around the height of 5'6''. She always wears something stylish
Personanilty: Lalia is a very nice and kind girl. She always cares for others. Lalia always trys to make her parents proud of her. She also is very sneaky.
Flaw: (At least 1):She falls in love a bit to easy, She stutters and is sorta shy at times, She is a bad fighter.
Pets: None
Rich or Poor?:Rich
Weapon of Choice:A bow
Talents: (Must list at least three.):Singing, Dancing, Running, Hunting.
Other:

Subject: Re: MLsweetarts charries. Fri Feb 25, 2011 3:41 pm

She's a bit too Mary-Sue ish. Try to bring out the flaws a bit more.

Posts : 20 Join date : 2011-02-23

Edited.

Subject: Re: MLsweetarts charries. Fri Feb 25, 2011 6:48 pm

Sorry to say something, but what would be the flaw that would disadvantage her in the arena? These seem more like people problems, y'know?

Subject: Re: MLsweetarts charries. Fri Feb 25, 2011 7:30 pm

your welcome for that idea, Admins Rolling Eyes

Subject: Re: MLsweetarts charries. Fri Feb 25, 2011 7:32 pm

YEAH, credit to Gaz for the idea. xD

Posts : 20 Join date : 2011-02-23

Edited

Subject: Re: MLsweetarts charries. Fri Feb 25, 2011 7:35 pm

the things I do around here Razz

Subject: Re: MLsweetarts charries. Sat Feb 26, 2011 8:45 am

xD Accepted!

Posts : 20 Join date : 2011-02-23

Name: (First and Last): Augustus(August) Callan Neilson
Age/Birthday:15/ December 13th
Gender:male
District:4
Family: (Mother, father, siblings [if any.]):A twin sister Mayleen(May), He has know parents because the died
Brief History: (Must be at least 4 sentences.):When, August was 12, his parents died, leaving him and May, alone to find for themselves. Luckily, their parents had some money, which was left to August and May. Even though, they had the money, they wanted to save it for when it might be needed more, So August and May both, started to do odd jobs here and there, Mainly fixing things. Also August and May, both appered to be very smart.
Physical Appearance: (Must be at least 4 sentences.):August has, Brown hair thats kinda shaggy-ish. He has green/blue colored eyes, that are kind looking but they show pain at times. August is very tall around 6'6'' and muscular. His torso, is covered in scares of differnt sizes.
Personality: (Must be at least 4 sentences.):August is very kind and nice. However, he can have a temper at times. Besides this he often falls in love, a bit to fast. And then he is shy, at first.
Flaw: (At least 1):He is afraid of deepwater, A poor fighter.
Pets: A calico cat, named Sandy
Rich or Poor?:In-between.
Weapon of Choice:A trident
Talents: (Must list at least three.):Fishing, Drawing, Athletics.
Other:

Pictures!:

Name: (First and Last):Mayleen(May) Arielle Neilson
Age/Birthday:15/December 13th
Gender:male
District:4
Family: (Mother, father, siblings [if any.]):A twin brother August
Brief History: (Must be at least 4 sentences.):Same as August's.
Physical Appearance: (Must be at least 4 sentences.):May has, Long blonde hair, thats naturaly curly. Like, her brother she has blue/green colored eyes. She is skinny, yet fit and tan.She is around 5'6'', May also has a scare on her cheek.
Personality: (Must be at least 4 sentences.):May, is very friendly and always does nice things for others. Like her brother, May is very shy at times. She also tends to fall in love to easy. May is also a loner, prefering to be by herself. However, May does have a talent for making friends.
Flaw: (At least 1):She is sensitive.
Pets: A tabby cat named, Aqua
Rich or Poor?:In-Between
Weapon of Choice:A trident
Talents: (Must list at least three.):Swiming, Surfing, Singing and Guitar
Other:

PICTURE!:

Subject: Re: MLsweetarts charries. Sat Mar 26, 2011 7:18 pm

I'm thinking you need a little more detail.

How did their parents die? How are they living on their own, underage? And is there any story behind the tridents? It's just that they both seem to have no experience as fighters, but both prefer tridents as weapons, and that seems a little stereotypical for District 4.

I'm also a little confused as well. It first says May falls in love easily, but then that she is a loner. Also, another flaw for her would be great.

Other than those few details, your twins look good!

Posts : 20 Join date : 2011-02-23

Ill edit later, I was half asleep when I made these.

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