Heya Animallady! ^_^ welcome to the RPing form, I know you didn't just join the site but I will welcome you anyways!
So glad you have decided to join us in the fun and make a character up.
First of all, you have the right idea but there's just a few things I'd like you to fix and maybe I'll throw in some suggestions along the way!
1. Tarantulas aren't allowed in the district.
2. Your history needs four sentences you only have two. Please add more.
3. Your appearance has only three sentences, and the whole sharpening the nails into talons is a no go here, so please change that!
Now for some suggestions on notes 2 and 3, for 2 you could maybe expand on what happened to her family considering no one just comes to earth in an eggshell like Mork did (Very old show you probably don't know it.) but either way it takes two to make a baby, so where are her parents? Anything happen to them? What about siblings? were they ever in the picture before hand? What about her life as a child? You could explain a lot of those things. Or if she has no family where does she live? on the streets? in a house? who does she live with? no one? a friend? more homeless friends? maybe an orphanage?
As for number 3, you could describe her build, is she fat, sleek, slim, athletic build, muscular, chubby, what? Is she tall? short? average? What's her height? like 5'4" ? 5'2" ? 5'8" ? Skin tone? Shoe size? clothing style? Is there any colour in her face at all? What about curves? does she have curves? Is she always seen being glum or no?
Also if you want to edit anything in there is an edit button in the top right hand that you can click and edit and once you've fixed this problems, post back and one of the staff members will have another look!
~Sor