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Emzink
Posts : 258 Join date : 2012-03-01 Birthday : 1999-04-21 Age : 25
Character sheet Hitpoints: (150/150) Character Name:: Alliance::
| Subject: Emzink's Character Sat Aug 24, 2013 3:25 pm | |
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Name: Valentine Sunny Marina Age/Birthday: 16/April 2nd Gender: F District: 2 Rich or Poor: Rich Weapon Of Choice: Sword Physical Appearance: I'm 5' 5" tall. I've got long, light brown hair. I'm thinking of cutting it shorter. I have darker golden-hazel eyes, and long lashes. 20/20 vision! I have cream colored teeth that are mostly straight, and lips on the thin side of average. I have a mostly square face with a pointy chin. I'm on the pale side of things, but just barely. You'll usually find me sporting no makup, and clothes I can move (and train) in. I have neatly kept eyebrows that are naturally thin. Personality: Most would call me reckless, but I'd call myself brave. I'm not some dumb jock, I just find bravery important. I'm pretty confident, and I stand up for what I believe in. I'm definatly an ENTJ, which means I'm a natural born leader. I take that result with pleasure. I'm a people person, and usually hang with boys, because girls are just too... squeamish. If I were in the games, I'd love to get an ally or two, and just go all out. You wouldn't find me hiding! I have a tendancy to bite my nails when I'm nervous. Flaw: Reckless, can't start fires, and overconfident Talents: Good with people, good with finding food/water, can use most weapons, and knows how to heal wounds. Family: I was raised in a training center. I guess my best friend counts as my brother. Pets: None Brief History: My name is Val. I was born in the rich part of district 2. My mom and dad sent me to a training facility so that I could have a chance at being a victor. I like it here; bravery and strength are valued by everyone. I fit righ in. I was a pretty smart kid, I picked up on stuff quickly. I hung out with the danger-seeking crowd. I've been prepping for the games my whole life, so I'm glad I have natural talent. I'm naturally tiny and agile, so brute force isn't my thing. I live for competition, weather it's of the body or mind. Losing gracefully is somthing I had to learn, but I do it less and less often. Preferred Angles: Brave, charismatic, Angles this tribute will not do: none Token: A bracelet with image resembling vampire fangs sewn on. Other: Personal quote: II Timothy 1:7 "For God did not give us a spirit of timidity cowardice, but of power and of love and of calm and well-balanced mind and discipline and self-control." Color: 33cc99
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| Subject: Re: Emzink's Character Sat Aug 24, 2013 5:09 pm | |
| Hi, Emzink, welcome back to the site! Now, about your character... First of all, the playby of Shailene Woodley is taken. Please check the FC list before using an FC for your character, because there's always a chance they might be taken. The FC list is located here: https://thehungergamesrp.rpg-board.net/t1791-faceclaims-redone Other than that, the only problem I can see is that Valentine is a little too perfect. One of her flaws is fear that she's being watched by a duck. xD Uh-uh. Especially considering that she has 4 very prominent, Games-assisting talents, she should have more of a flaw than 'reckless.' Please expand on this, even if you don't add another specific flaw. How would this bring her down in a situation? Reckless goes well with overconfident, bites off more than she can chew, etc. etc. This isn't a big issue- more of a suggestion/request. Oh, and for her history, there isn't really a training center where they would grow up and be raised. This is the Hunger Games, not Divergent. There's not really a Dauntless living quarters training facility type thing. But I'll let it slide because I doubt it will come up in RP. Please edit your character with the necessary changes and someone will come along and accept her! Thanks! |
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Posts : 258 Join date : 2012-03-01 Birthday : 1999-04-21 Age : 25
Character sheet Hitpoints: (150/150) Character Name:: Alliance::
| Subject: Re: Emzink's Character Sat Aug 24, 2013 5:22 pm | |
| I feel stupid now. I origianally put her in district four, but changed it to two in my mind, and forgot to retype it. (I decided her personality made her a career.) I feel dumb! I will make those changes. Name: Vladimir Aaron Klam Age/Birthday: 16/December 19th Gender: M District: 2 Rich or Poor: Rich Weapon Of Choice: Sword Physical Appearance: (Playby-Asa Butterfield) I'm 5' 9" tall. I have toned muscles, mostly from my daily jogs; but I'm quite thin for my age. I've got medium, black hair. I have pale blue eyes, and wear reading glasses in school. I have pearl white teeth that are mostly straight, and pale pink lips. I have a slightly triangular face. I'm on the pale side of things, but whatcha gonna do? I have a scar shaped like a cresent moon on my left hand. Once a girl told me that "I'd be cute if I weren't a nerd." Valentine almost punched her, it was pretty funny. Personality: I am an INTJ, which means I live in the world of ideas and strategic planning. I find that the most admirable qualities in a person are Intellegence, strength(Mental and physical) and humor. Some would call me bossy, I'd consider it... persuasive. I love to have a good laugh with my friends, but am a usually serious person. I am well grounded and realistic. I don't easily trust people and am naturally suspicious of others. The ends justify the means. Flaw: Not trusting, introverted, not good with hand to hand combat Talents: Intelligant, can find food/water, and knows how to heal wounds. Family: I was raised in a training center. My best friend counts as my sister. Pets: None Brief History: My name is Vlad. I was born in the rich part of district 2. My mom and dad sent me to a training facility so that I could have a chance at being a victor. I'm naturally skinny, but I work hard to be one of the best fighters in the room. I was a pretty smart kid, I picked up on stuff quickly. When I was younger, I met a trainee named Valentine. She's my best friend. We train together and stuff too. Every day I take a two to three mile jog before breakfast. I'd love to be in the games, It would be pretty awesome. Preferred Angles: Brave, witty, aloof Angles this tribute will not do: none Token: A bracelet with image resembling a white heart sewn on. Other: Personal quote: TBA Color: B8860B | |
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| Subject: Re: Emzink's Character Sat Aug 24, 2013 9:44 pm | |
| D'AW ASA BUTTFERFIELD. <3 See I know he's like 16 now but he will always look 12 to me. Well... maybe 14. But anyway, since he's 16 in real life, I won't complain that you made him that old.
I didn't have a problem with the district for Val, so I'm not sure we're on the same page here, but whatever. It'll do.
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