Zeskers Characters

General
Name:Arko Bluast
Age/Birthday:15 August 3rd
Gender:Male
District:2
Rich or Poor?:Rich
Weapon Of Choice:Dual Weild Kukris
Personality/Appearance: Black hair, emoish look to his har. Black sags under his eyes, Crooked nose from multiple fights. Big build in the upper and lower body frame. Tan skin from being in the sun, grey like eyes like storm clouds. Intimidating, mean, quite.
Physical Appearance:he is 6,2, weighs about 180 lb. Has a muscle build in his upper and lower regions of his body. A sandy tan from being out in the weather, and black hair. Grey eyes with natrual black eye lining around his eyes. A crooked nose from multiple fights and training sessions.
Personality:He mostly keeps to himself, he is very intemidating to anyone. Very hostile towards people, unstable at times.
Flaw:Has flash backs and he freezes for a moment.

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General
Name:Arko Blaust
Age/Birthday:16, August 3rd
Gender:Male
District:2
Rich or Poor?:Rich
Weapon Of Choice:Dual weild Kukris
Personality/Appearance
Physical Appearance:Is 6"2, has a nice body form in his upper and lower regions. A nice tan from the weather, with a small hint of white under his eyes. Black natrual hair with some gray streaks under it. Grey eyes that are mixed with gold specks. Has a long, white, bold scar across his cheeck, and multiple in the X formation across his back, and chest..
Personality:Arko has many secrets, some that even the Peace keepers don't know. He is very intemidating to most people around in the district. But most of the time he is very quite and keeps to himself. Rarely is he humerouse to the citizens and peace keepers.
Flaw:Has flash backs and freezes him for a moment.
Talents:Hand to Hand combat, sword weilding, and un armed combat.
Family/History
Family:Mother: Laura Blaust, killed by a stray arrow in training center. Father: Kealer Blaust, extremly Ill, in a coma. No siblings.
Pets:Black Wolf
Brief History: On an average warm July day, Arko Blaust, was sitting in the training center waiting for his mother to finish polishing the weapons up on the racks. That day, one of the trainers was practicing archery, but as he was releasing a peacekeeper busted open the door with a loud noise. The man turned his body, taking the arrow with him, it arched over and empaled his mother in the chest. Arko never forgot the moment as he watched her bleed out and turn a paley white. His father had a anxiety attack and went insane, falling hard on his head one night, he fell into a coma.
Others
Preferred Angles :Dark, silent, misteriouse,
Angles this tribute will not do:Happy, joyful, blistfull (Max. 3)
Token:A black necklace with a clasp on the end, holding a picture of his mother.
Other:

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Arko Blaust is Accepted