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Pibbles
Princess Gummy Bear
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Join date : 2012-03-17
Birthday : 1998-07-09
Age : 26
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Character Name:: Sebastian Sommer
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|  Subject: How much have your posts improved?  Tue Feb 05, 2013 8:37 pm | |
| So I was just scrolling through the sight on my mom's IPad when I decided to check out some of my really early posts... - one of the first posts I ever made:
 "Protect those that you love. If you don't, than who else will be there to love you back?"
I work till I ache my bones
At the end I take home my hard earned pay all on my own -
I get down on my knees
And I start to pray
Till the tears run down from my eyes
Lord - somebody - somebody
Can anybody find me - somebody to love?Azalea was walking out of her home. Her new home. Azalea's older brother, Nalin was out in the feilds working. Right now, Azalea was in charge of her younger siblings, Glen and Heather were running around in the yard-chasing a stray cat. Heather had wanted Azalea to adopt the cat, and as much as Azalea wanted to, Nalin had the final choice. The family of four coudln't affored a cat, they could barly keep themselves up as it was. There was no way that they could take care of the cat. Azalea went down the steps leading up to her home, and down to the wash-bucket. It had just rained a few nights ago, so there was still water in the washbucket. Azalea looked down into it, and saw her reflection. Her face was greecy, and she needed a bath. But the plates needed to be cleaned to. The plates that would probobly kill her one day, because of all of the gunk on them. No matter how much any of the siblings would scrubb, some of the gunk would never come off. Walking down the old dirt path was a familiar face. Azalea smiled, and said " Hello!" to a neighbor. Everyday - I try and I try and I try -
But everybody wants to put me down
They say I'm goin' crazy
They say I got a lot of water in my brain
Got no common sense
I got nobody left to believe
Yeah - yeah yeah yeah
Which I guess is okay. But then I looked at the posts when we were chatting on the forum: - Spoiler:
OKSOTHISISALITTLERANT
So, two people on here, Lightning and Sorella AKA Snori, used my template for their character's. No, I'm not complaining, I'm complimenting myself. It makes me feel special to know the fact that others like my template so much that they want to use it. :3
OKI'MDONENOW. BAIE.
- and this...:
Well hey, I would post in the arena but... *glares at Snori*
JK JK no, but seriously guys. I've seen some of you onlinr, but NO ONE'S POSTIN IN THE ARENA. I WUNT TO BE ENTERTAINED AND NOTHIN'S GOIN ON!!!!
Seriously, though. I like reading all of the other topics now that I have a lotta spare time...*glares at Snori again*. JK JK!! You know I love you in a sisterly-over-the-internet-we'll-never-actually-meet-in-person kinda way.
And I look back and realize what an annoying 12-year-old I was. So what about you guys? How have your posts changed? How mature have you gotten sense you first joined this site? | |
| | | | Kira
Posts : 389
Join date : 2012-11-23
Birthday : 1993-09-10
Age : 31
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| | Subject: Re: How much have your posts improved? Tue Feb 05, 2013 8:43 pm | |
| I've only been on the site since like a few months now...so...ya. But, I have posted in Snitchseeker and it's tought me not to post as other people. Stick to your own character. That sort of thing. | |
| | | | Loki
God of Sarcasm
 Posts : 4574
Join date : 2011-02-09
Birthday : 1995-12-11
Age : 28
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| | Subject: Re: How much have your posts improved? Tue Feb 05, 2013 8:45 pm | |
| Well, one of my early posts elsewhere included "Choked on his own Stench" I like to think I've rested at that pinnacle of maturity. Its quite the astounding achievement.  | |
| | | | Emzink
Posts : 258
Join date : 2012-03-01
Birthday : 1999-04-21
Age : 25
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| | Subject: Re: How much have your posts improved? Tue Feb 05, 2013 8:58 pm | |
| My first post in character
I walked up and down the streets, waiting. The games seemed to take FOREVER to get here now that I was elligable again. I wondered if I would be chosen or if I would have to volenteer. My thoughts were interupted by somone walking twards me. "G'day." I nodded politely. "What's your name?"
My first character
District: 2 [Masonry]
Age: 14
Gender: Female
Unknown birth family
Wealth: Middle Class
History: When I was younger my family sent me away to live in a training facility so that could win the games. I worked day and night to prepare. I was voted best in my class when I was 9, and I made a few friends. The only thing I know about my past before the 'Center was that I think I may have had a brother. When I was 13 I was adopted into the Bell family so that I could legally volenteer for the games. I still visit the 'center often.
Appearace: See Photo. Cass has messy brown/red hair and brown eyes. Her freckles are her favorite feature. She is 5' 3'' and has bangs. Her muscles are toned.
Personality: Cass is arrogant, ambitious, beautiful, cunning, and prepared. What she wants most in the world is to win the games and meet her proud family. She is quite happy at the training center but knows that if she does not win the games, her whole life would have been a waste. Cass's oddest trait is that she is alergic to beans. Her favorite old movie is Pirates of Penzance.
No pets
Weapon of Choice: Bow and Arrow a throwing knife
Talents: Trained, Precise, Accurate, Flexible (Can handle variables).
Flaw: Procrastinates, Cocky.
Other:
Quote - “Pfft! Yeah right, like I’m gonna lose?”
Angle - Feisty, Confident
Wow. I forgot how much I'd changed in the little time that I've been here.
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| | | | Sorella
Retired Admin
Posts : 4072
Join date : 2012-03-02
Birthday : 1997-11-02
Age : 27
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| | Subject: Re: How much have your posts improved? Tue Feb 05, 2013 9:06 pm | |
| Well for me, I'm not going to go based on the site or whatever, even though I've almost been here a year, anyway, I think I matured most in my three years over on another site, I mean, I was fairly terrible back when I was a youngster but the thing is, when you're so horrid at writing you never think you are, you just think you're great and stuff like that. I used to be absolutely retched with grammar too. Anyway in a span of two years, I grew as a writer, until now. Where on that other site I'm always messaged to do literate(high class, I guess) roleplays with them. I usually decline though. Anyway I came a long way in three years. I used to be fairly pushy too  | |
| | | | Loki
God of Sarcasm
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Join date : 2011-02-09
Birthday : 1995-12-11
Age : 28
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| | Subject: Re: How much have your posts improved? Tue Feb 05, 2013 9:27 pm | |
| Yea, you were pretty horrid But now you're awesome xD | |
| | | | Chiiyoko
Super Purple Buddy
Posts : 1474
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Birthday : 1996-06-18
Age : 28
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| | Subject: Re: How much have your posts improved? Tue Feb 05, 2013 9:56 pm | |
| Well I'd like to say that my writing style have changed to become one of my own since I've started rping in general. In our syllabus of English, it's always be forced into our brains for essays; Always start a new paragraph when starting a speech. Never have too mcuh dialogue. Don't be ambitious and start writing fight scenes, you must be crazy to do that and you'd fail. Don't write about supernatural stuff. Stick to the everyday usual problems that your examiner can relate. Write personal recounts 'cause your life was Sooooo fun. And then I found the very first rp post I did back in 2010 in another site, thinking about it now, it humored me so xD - very first post in rping (with a jerkface NPC that's put in place):
Tsukiko walked in front of the inn and sighed.
"Let's hope you don't get chased away," she said stroking Fay, her lovely chocolate brown horse. She got off Fay get gabbed her things, leaving Fay outside of the inn first. She knew Fay wouldn't run away but she couldn't help but say "Be good and stay here okay?" before she stepped into the inn. Inside, it seemed like any other inn she stayed in before.
She smiled and went to the front desk greeting a middle aged man, "Hello! i would like to-"
"Hello! i'm on my break. come back never."
that made her draw back a little but she continued.
"well if you just give me a room i wouldn't need to bother you anymore," Tsukiko pouted.
The middle aged man sighed and tossed a key, with the number 221 big and bold, at her and said, "write your particulars, 200 gold and off you go."
"..." He annoyed Tsukiko but all she did was follow his instructions so that she won't need to see him anytime soon.
"Tch. what an annoying guy. Haven't he heard of the word 'smile'?" Tsukiko thought to herself and rolled her eyes as she left the front desk in search of her room.
Before she even reached the stairs, she remembered something and had to face Mister never-smiled-in-his-life-before again.
"Sorry, i was wondering if there's anyway to keep a horse here because i have one outside right now and-" she tried to explain to the middle aged man but he ended up blowing his top.
"What?! Don't bring it in here! Keep your horse somewhere else! GO!"
Tsukiko cringed by his sudden outburst but left after he said that.
"Wow, i guess i'll have to keep Fay the way i used to. So much for a new hope of a Horse friendly inn." She thought to herself.
God. All them paragraphs. I did what I was made to do all my years but then I learnt that writing wasn't that rigid. (then I had to maintain two writing styles, my own in rping and school xD) More interestingly in a way I've change would be fight posts. When I came here I knew nuts about vocabs, terminology for anything violent since we were never taught nor exposed to write stuff like this. What was I getting myself into when I joined here a year ago? I had no clue All I knew was "He swung his sword" "he blocked the attack" and "He shot an arrow" . literally. And then I started getting bored with my lack of knowledge and research and google came along.  It's amazing how using a bit of fancy terminology (that you pretend you know) can make it look so much cooler  - A random among the first few posts in my first games (28th) :
Skye sighed, missing yet again. He saw Snow being killed off by Maria and as she looked towards him with a sad smile. He mouthed towards her in a pained expression, Sorry... People were starting to die, seeing Ashley fall to the ground and he had that horrible feeling within him. She was the first that Chaos targeted and she lived on till now. He grabbed her sword and first aid kit, abandoning his club, Sorry Ashley, Rest in Peace. He saw Heppa aim for Genevieve again and tried to block for her. With a sword in hand, Skye felt much more comfortable and lunged at Heppa, taking a swing at her.
- latest post in my second games, the 31st games:
 
Solange bit her lip, not knowing what to do until she looked at the rough, hardy bark and smiled as a brilliantly stupid idea that could potentially kill her came to mind. She slowly relaxed the string and placed the arrow under her belt once again, together with the four or so arrows that were meant to be of easy access. She tightened the belt just in case and slung the bow over her shoulder as she began to climb. Her figure that was deemed to be quite small came in handy in this situation. Step by step, Solange carefully placed her footing as the tree covered most of her. The first step to being unnoticed is to first believe that you're unnoticed no? Solange kept her breathing soft as she continued her way up till she tugged onto a steady branch. She grabbed onto it, making sure it was strong enough to hold her and more, before deciding to sit on it. Dangling her legs, Solange manage to catch the view of the fight going on, and realised how dangerous close she actually was. Solange took her bow and silently nocked in an arrow again, taking a deep breath and letting it out, camouflaging the sound with the rain. She relaxed, closing an eye to get a good aim and smiled. Her brother was going to love this, regardless of whether she did it or not. Solange released the nock and in a fraction of a second, she pulled another out from her quiver ready to do the same again, and again; delivering three consequent arrows, each aimed for a different pair of legs, not really bothering with who's legs. With another arrow in place, she lowered her bow as it rested on her thighs, silently waiting as the arrows cut through the rain. In this relationship with archery, stealth and speed were her best friends.
I daresay I learnt quite a bit in my one year here minus the hiatus period of about 3-4 months Maturity? psh, I'm way too young at heart for that.  | |
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| | Subject: Re: How much have your posts improved? Tue Feb 05, 2013 11:54 pm | |
| I doubt I could find my first RP post ever, but on this site... hm... I think it got deleted/archived, I can try to find it... HAY GUESS WHAT THEY WERE IN GRAVEYARD This is my first post here, but it's a very early one that was shorter than my first post and I didn't want to have it all clogging up space. x_x - early hg rainy post:
Farren arrived at the orchard and walked over to a tall apple tree. She gripped her basket in her teeth and swung herself up on a low branch before climbing up to the first apple. She balanced on two branches and plucked the apple from the branch, apologizing the the tree briefly and placing it in her basket. Slowly, she collected four more apples in a similar fashion.
She frowned. Farren knew she was working slowly. Even off-shift, she wanted to work quickly. She grabbed the branch above her and took a minute to pull herself up, shimmying along the branch to six more apples. She smiled briefly.
No, no, not bad enough.... not good, obviously, but just wait... This was I think my first or one of my first forum RP sites. I was like 10-11, so don't judge me. xD Also, because I was li'l Rain and thought myself and my age all mature, I made my characters around my age at the time... then now that I'm looking at it, other people who joined (it was my forum RP) started making their characters a similar age... and I dunno, maybe it's just to relate, but I find it a biiiiit creepy. Also I changed them like crazy when I got bored. Names, appearances, personalities, superpowers (pretty much every RP I joined on this forum had superpowers), everything. Actually, I'm surprised, but both of my RP threads were at the top of the RP page section thingy.... maybe it remembered me? Maybe someone revived them? (I hope not. I'm getting a bit weirded out. And I think this one supposedly 11-year-old was like stalking my RP's because he/she/ithinkitwasahe was in ALL of them... erugh) Also, some of the people there (including me) had... interesting grammar. But here ya go. - slightly earlier rainy posts (they are short):
1. She boarded the train and fell backwards as it sped off. In five minutes she was there. "That was fast," she said. it was nighttime when she got there.
2. She was bored, waiting for the train to come. At least the trains in Serenity were clean.... it was there! She was on her way to school.
There were a lot of empty seats on the train. It was HUGE!!! She sat down in an empty section and waited for the train to start. She was early.
3. "I remember the trains in the Middle. God, they were dirty..."
Oh, and then this mod said to write longer posts and I got all uppity and tried to write this 'super long post' and then it deleted and it looked like an excuse and im sure it wasn't a great post to begin with anyway.
4. aaaaannnnd the others are longer posts and more embarrassing in the childish-mary-sue-plot way so I'm just going to stop there. xD
I started with what I think of a 'gateway RP' and also possibly the bane of the RP world... Warrior Cat RP's. Yup. I was OBSESSED. Kill me now. EDIT: Actually, I found this little Mary-Sue gem of mine. - mary sue problems also i named an NPC after my sister's now ex bf 0_o:
Lupyne dropped down her stuff and started on the way to her first class, Combat. She laughed, as she could've taught the class. Still, she went as a chance to look fairly innocent then hurt people. Badly. She smiled and walked to the class. "Alright, first up, we're going to see what you've got. NO KILLING. Yet.... Hey, you. Are you sure you c an handle this class?" He said at the sight of Lupyne. She looked up. "Oh, yes.." He shrugged. "Not my fault if you get hurt, kid. Alright, NO KILLING (yet), again. "You're with...Bram, over there. Careful. He's our class's best fighter." Lupyne smiled even more at the "challenge." She turned to the lare, 18-year-old teenager. When the teacher said to begin, she simply grabed him and flipped him onto the floor, with a loud smash. The teacher fainted, and Lupyne left the room.
I also used the word 'fightfulness' in that charrie's description. What the hell is fightfulness? And I posted like 5 times in a row. RPing. With myself. Yeah. I'd like to say I've improved. I hope. And I found out why it was bumped to the top. Somebody (rightfully) said, "I have No words For this Topic ......." Annnnnnnnnnd I'm going to go hide my face forever now. |
| | | | Sno
Panda King
Posts : 1443
Join date : 2011-02-08
Birthday : 1994-12-20
Age : 29
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Character Name:: Brook Shields
Alliance:: Victors
| | Subject: Re: How much have your posts improved? Mon Feb 11, 2013 7:58 am | |
| Have I matured? LOL. Not even slightly. A Panda's keyboarding skills are only as good as the bamboo he eats. Skills I've developed have been because of outside sources, and I use those in my online interactions. It's relatively easy to type out a few pages worth of writing in a post for me. I've had many an experience with this partially because of outside life, but also a large majority due to the fact that I would get into some situation every 6 or so months and end up defending myself, which, if you know me, I never do in less than 300 pages.
My grammar has also not improved in the slightest, other people could tell more than me that I've improved. If at all. EDIT: On another note I forgot to address, this site turned two years old three days ago. | |
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| | Subject: Re: How much have your posts improved? Mon Feb 11, 2013 10:13 am | |
| :O HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO THE SITE THEN GOSHDARNIT!!! |
| | | | Ariiyoko
Super Purple Buddy
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| | Subject: Re: How much have your posts improved? Mon Feb 11, 2013 1:07 pm | |
| I'd have to say I'm the same as Sno. Have I matured...no. Also since I have long left school I have not learned new things in school like my younger peers may have. The only thing I can really say has improved has been the posting code I use. My older posts with Rhea had no color besides her dialogue and no header or even picture. Of course those made sense because I posted some on my phone and it wasnt like I had gifs like do now for her fc. If anything I have made things simpler on my end as far as codes and it looking nice. But content wise I feel as though it is exactly the same. My grammar and writing style hasn't really improved or evolved. Though I am the worst person to make that judgement about myself | |
| | | | Light
Posts : 442
Join date : 2011-03-12
Birthday : 1997-08-08
Age : 27
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Character Name:: Drew Walker
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| | Subject: Re: How much have your posts improved? Wed Feb 27, 2013 10:46 pm | |
| I like to think that I haven't really changed in my RP length, I mean here was one - Its a lot to read:
The creature looked forwards with dark eyes, his skin tight and muscles tense. The Cold wet floor of the morning forest under his feet, and the exhilarating smell of Pine in his nose. A Small Chill Ran Over His Sensitive Skin, Easing his breath from his paranoid Mind. He Crouched and Watched As The Humanoids, Maneuvered over the unknown terrain. Thy Knew Nothing Of Moving Slowly or looking, and watching. The Dark Green leaves of the forest, blocked most of his 5/20 sight, so he stood up to his full 10.11ft figure, watching as the little critters moved about slowly, also knowing his attack had to be precise moment or they could all die. It was strange How the strongest, Cruelest creatures fell Looked towards me to lead them into battle, i mean i am the smallest by like a few yards... besides me, the next smallest is 16ft... I Pulled off my two 9ft One Handed Sword. I Felt The Noise of The fighter Jets Vibrate through the ground, i knew the attack was imminent. i took off faster than most of the others, and mentally sent a note of attack through the minds of about 50. I ran through the first of the soldier stepping on a bunch of them, and headed towards there war machines. i brought my sword down the front of the first and then sent my second into the chest of another. I Left my sword there, and slammed my fist into the face of the third crushing the human inside. I Leaped Up and smashed my feet into the knees of the Forth one... I ripped off there Weapon of range and pointed it at the fifth... Not Sure How TO Use It it Searched The Dead Humans mind, looking for anything to help me. I Squeezed the handle of the Long Range, And A Object burst out, Exploding the Robot. The Left Side Of My Lips Lifted in A Half Smile. i Shot The next 5 robots, before i ran out of ammo. i Sighed and grabbed my swords, racing to the Large Hanger, Feeling the soft resistance of the human bodies under my feet, and the feel of the bullets ripping past my face, and the heart racing sensation of Battle in my mind. I Was stabbing those who opposed me, when I Slid to a stop in front of the Hanger. A Large 39ft Beast Made From Actual flesh Landed Upon me, Its Body Was Dark, slimy and muscled. It Was A Good Opponent for those who where stronger than me. The Long Hair had Eyes, and body parts of others from our race. We Had Met Before, And i Was Knew That It Was Held From Me For This Reason, so i would die by This Horrid Four Legged Creature. And I Sent My Swords into the sides of the beast. My Left arm snapped and splinted into nothing, and sent a hard Punch from my Right Fist. The Large Face ripped into mine, Pulling away my Left side. I Hardened my fist, and slid it up his throat raking down it with my Long Claws. i Urged myself up, and Healed My Left Arm, Rapidly Smashing With My Left Hand Then My Right Hand. It Roared With a Pissed off Attitude, and it grabbed it's Top and Bottom Jaw Pulling it apart. I Pulled Left And Right, and Sent My Feet into this Throat, My Hand-like Feet raked his sides causing all the bleeding i could. Accidently Acting up The Gag Reflex, i Was Hurled Up Backwards. Guts And Left overs from my fellow comrades, was strewn all over me. A Light yellow slim dripped off of my skin. It Roared with more Horror, and charged,it broken jaw flopping back and forth...I Grabbed his Hair and flipped over his back pulling. The Beast Flew over my head, sailing into the floor, and causing a small crater. I Summoned my swords from the sides of the Beast. I Charged, and sent my swords hilt deep into the brain of the beast. It Roared and sent up a large leg, and i yanked my left sword free, and turned quickly cutting off a large nail. the beast withered and cried for mercy. i pulled my Right sword free and leaped up High, flipped forwards and finished the beast with two quick jabs. The Whole Place Around me Erupted in Applause, as i realized that I was the last one who was left fighting. I Sighed and was ambushed by hugs and high fives from those who were twice as big as me.
And but if you actually read it, I have horrible grammar and bad sentence structure..... now I'd like to believe its better than that... Now for my charries? I have surely increased... - Just promise you wont judge? I was like 10:
Name: Rayn Jackson
Age: 12
Gender: Male
years in camp: 1
God parent: Vibe (minor god of vibrations)
Mortal parnet: Sally Jackson
Physical apearance: tan, blackish hair, pale blue eyes (blind)
personality: determined powerful quick witted
Pets: large black leathery furred bat.
weapons: long staff to help control vibrations
talents: speaking with bats, getting hurt, Kicking Arsenals, and bat flying
others: Zues kid-napped me and claimed as his own. he did this because he couldn't bare to be mortal, a prophercy said that i would come and Mortalize him. when i went to olpmous to confront him he murdered me. With Vibe knowing the truth i ask him to tell my half-brother ( Percy Jakcson) about me.
the reason Vibe did't know i was a live was because i was said to be dead. Zeus used the mist to distort the doctors mind. They eventully forgot about me.
And one from now... - still don't judge, i'm no god here... But He is my favorite:
Personal Information
.:Name:.
Ryan Flounders
.:Birthday:.
February 29th
.:Age:.
16
.:Gender:.
Male
District Information
.:District:.
10
.:Status:.
Was rich, now poor
.:Weapon of Choice:.
TriClaw Glove - a glove that has three large steel claws on the end
Family, Personality, Appearance, and more!.:Family:.Mother - Deceased Father- drunkard who run his business into the ground, after letting all the Cattle loose in a rage Lori - Sister who was trampled to death two years ago .:Brief History:.Ryan and Lori grew up in luxury, and never had to do anything. No homework, no food preparations, nor laundry. Ryan and Lori were as close as siblings could get. they shared secrets, hope and dreams... Then two years ago, Their father, James lost himself in a rage of drunkenness, and let loose the cattle. Lori, noticing the loss they were about to suffer tried to herd the cattle back into the shelter, but was trampled before she got anywhere. Ryan hasn't forgiven his father for the death of his best friend. Ryan has had to change his lifestyle completely, his friends turned on him, he lost his faith that his father wouldn't be to drunk to make dinner, and he found out how the other life has lived. In the end, he was happy that he had kept himself in great shape, otherwise he was sure he would've died by now. .:Physical Appearance:.Ryan has dark long hair, and brown muddy eyes. he stands around 6' but is short for his age, with almost exactly half legs and half torso, he is built. Ryan had kept himself physically strong and perfectly fit, with large arms and pecks, to a hard six pack and solid calves. Ryan has a little Italian in him, which is rare, since he has never heard of Italy, or Europe or America. He has a tight, angular jaw and high cheek bones, with thin lips. He has the last gift of his sisters on all the rime, a stainless steel unicorn necklace. He has his fathers watch, which he was given the night before the rage quit of his fathers, which caused them to lose all their money. Ryan also has several scars across his back, long white strands where the whip had peeled to much skin away. Ryan wears a pair of dark shorts and that's all he owns, even in winter. .:Personality:.OVERALL:A handsome gentleman with a charming smile. Has the greatest respect for life and people, especially women. A great sense of humor, easy going and modest. An even greater sense of adventure. But has been known to fall to grips of an adrenaline lust, often risking himself for a thrill seek. A person that believes in all people, until they have proven otherwise, and even then might still believe in you. His mind is amazing, slightly insane but pure genius, the only force stronger is his heart. To be loved by, is to be… Truly... Loved. LOVE:Ryan's love life is complex to explain. He knew who he was, before he lost Lori, now she is gone, and he doesn't know anything. He has gone back and looked at his life, examined the areas where he felt attracted to someone, when he was with his friends. It was never the girl herself, but who she was with. This came as a shocker to Ryan, and his love life is a touchy subject, that even he is confused about. TEMPER:The only time a Ryan does not show respect is if you piss him off, usually by giving him crap, doing something to him that is absolutely uncalled for, or asking dumb questions that requires some common sense to answer. Another thing that may piss him off is doubting him because he’ll go to all lengths to prove you wrong and then he will be mad at you. Be warned: Ryan is usually easy to anger and tough to cool down. Ask nicely (but not immediately after pissing him off), he will forgive you, but usually you will have to owe him one. .:Flaw:.Ryan is a thrill seeker, usually causing fights, gambling, and or shop-lifting. He puts himself in risky situations, some life or death. .:Talents:.Ryan is musically inclined, he can play just about any instrument, and has excelled in combat situations that require immense physical training, or intellect. .:Other:.Just ask... either way is fine by me 
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| | | | Loki
God of Sarcasm
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| | Subject: Re: How much have your posts improved? Wed Feb 27, 2013 10:57 pm | |
| @Light I remember seeing that Character when you first made him on CHB. | |
| | | | Light
Posts : 442
Join date : 2011-03-12
Birthday : 1997-08-08
Age : 27
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Character Name:: Drew Walker
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| | Subject: Re: How much have your posts improved? Wed Feb 27, 2013 11:03 pm | |
| yeah it was terrible haha
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| | Subject: Re: How much have your posts improved? Thu Feb 28, 2013 11:45 pm | |
| I don't even... hey, wait a minute, that character looks familiar! Oh yeah, because that's pretty much exactly how my characters used to be, except they were all "BA" girls who were better than everyone else, especially guys. xD But yea. I feel ya, bro. |
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Join date : 2011-03-12
Birthday : 1997-08-08
Age : 27
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Character Name:: Drew Walker
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| | Subject: Re: How much have your posts improved? Thu Feb 28, 2013 11:58 pm | |
| Eh... We are all entitled to our own opinions no matter how wrong yours is | |
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| | Subject: Re: How much have your posts improved? Fri Mar 01, 2013 1:12 am | |
| I meant the first one... the 'before' character... reminds me of mine... because I tried to make them special. |
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