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General
Name: (First and Last) Domino Emery
Age/Birthday: 14 years old, January 21st
Gender: Female
District:12
Rich or Poor?: Poor
Weapon Of Choice: Knives cus they're easy to throw (even though she's not good at that)
Personality/Appearance
Physical Appearance: (Must be at least 4 sentences.) She stands four foot and twelve inches tall. She has dark brown hair and a nice set of grey eyes. Her skin is olive colored. She has hollow cheeks and a skinny frame from lack of enough food.
Personality: (Must be at least 4 sentences.)-She's a timid girl. She's kind to people or least tries to be. She's one to try and avoid violence as much as possible. When she first meets someone, she is a bit quiet. If she gets to know the person, she opens up a bit more which could account for one of her weaknesses.
Flaw: (At least 1) She's easily paranoid at almost everything and worries alot. She has a scar on the right side of her cheek. She has scrapes and cuts from being knocked around from people bigger then her.
Talents:(Must list three) For being small, she's fast and can climb
Family/History
Family: (Mother, father, siblings [if any.])She does have a mother and father. Her mom's name is Magnolia. Her dad's name is Randle.
Pets: No
Brief History: (Must be at least 4 sentences.)She grew up in the seam all of her life. Her mother works washing other people's clothes. Her father works late hours in the mines. As a result, her mom is the one taking care of her most of the time. ) She may be an only child but is not in any way spoiled.
Others
Preferred Angles :(Innocent, Sexy, Mysterious.. etc..)Mysterious, maybe like a little school girl?
Angles this tribute will not do: (Max. 3)Sexy sarcastic (reason? she is scared to death of the capitol)
Token:A heart shaped stone she found in the square when she was 9.
Other:
Fears-The capitol, spiders, being under water.

Physical appearance needs to be redone. Those aren't sentences, a comma doesn't make the start of a new sentence.

Instead you could do something like, "Domino has dark brown hair that goes down to her shoulders. She has a nice set of grey eyes." That's two sentences right there. So if you could just change that into actual sentences that'd be great! (:

You still need one more sentence in her Physical Appearance section, but after that she can be accepted!

EDIT:

Accepted! Have fun RP'ing!

General
Name: (First and Last) Allison Missionary "Allie"
Age/Birthday: Age 17, Birthday-June 10th
Gender: Female
District: 2
Rich or Poor?: Rich
Weapon Of Choice: Throwing ax
Personality/Appearance
Physical Appearance: (Must be at least 4 sentences.) She has red hair down to her shoulders which grows in curls. She has blue eyes and light skin. She's not fat but, has a larger frame then most. Her face and arms are covered in freckles. She stands about 5 ft and 6 inches, give or take a couple inches. Her arms and face are covered in training scars.
Personality: (Must be at least 4 sentences) She's one that is loyal to her friends. She may come off as a spoiled brat sometimes but, she's really a nice person if you get to know her. She is happy and go lucky most of the time and likes to meet new people. She is a calm person most of the time. It takes a lot to make her mad.
Flaw: (At least 1) She doesn't know the feeling of being "starved". She can be a little too go lucky sometimes which may land her in fights with others. She sometimes thinks before she speaks so there go, more fights with people. She tends to have a sarcastic sense of humor which some people don't like. Oh and because of her large frame, she tends to not be the greatest climber of trees.
Talents:(Must list three) She is great with throwing knives, a throwing ax, and swimming. Yes, even if district 2 is not near a beach, she is good at swimming.
Family/History
Family: (Mother, father, siblings [if any.]) She has a mom, dad, and 14 year old sister named Lilly.

Spoiler:

Pets: A silvery grey cat named Misty that's small and a year old. Misty's a girl.
Brief History: (Must be at least 4 sentences.) She was born into a strict family. They expected her to be perfect in everything that she did. She has been training for the Hunger Games sense she was 7 years old. She did have an older brother but, he died in a previous Hunger Games.
Others
Preferred Angles :(Innocent, Sexy, Mysterious.. etc..) Mysterious, confident.
Angles this tribute will not do: (Max. 3) innocent, sexy.
Token: a heart shaped locket that's just the pendent not with the chain. So it fits in her pocket. It has a picture of her mom, dad, sister, and 18 year old brother
Other: Uh...not that I know of.

Accepted!

General
Name: Jake Trenton (First and Last)
Age/Birthday: 17, May 9th
Gender:Male
District:4
Rich or Poor?:Rich
Weapon Of Choice: Throwing ax
Personality/Appearance
Physical Appearance: (Must be at least 4 sentences.): He has long shaggy hair. His hair is brown blond. He has blue eyes with flecks of green in them. So to the naked eye, they look to be greenish blue. He has training scars all over his body. Not to mention bruises and welps on his arms. He stands about 5' 7" and has a large build from training sense he was 7. He has scars on his wrists and ankles from cutting him selves. The scars don't show though.
Personality: (Must be at least 4 sentences.)-He's over all a nice kid. But, he doesn't like people that much. Most of the time, he is numb even if he has a few "friends". If you didn't know him that well, you would think that he was this snobish loud mouth kid. He just speaks his mind and is not afraid of what people think of him.
Flaw: (At least 1) Can be a bit of a loud mouth like I said. It could get him in trouble with others if he says something to the wrong person. Which has happened.
Talents:(Must list three)-He is good at throwing knives. He is also good at throwing axes and swimming.
Family/History
Family: (Mother, father, siblings [if any.]) He has his father. His mother died from lung cancer. He's an only child.
Pets:None yet.
Brief History: (Must be at least 4 sentences.) He was born into a strict family. His father expected him to be perfect. His mother would always try to protect her son. She died when Jake was just 10 years old. After that, his father would always get drunk and knock him around and beat him on a daily basis. He would always say that Jake was never good enough for him. As a result, Jake slowly became numb and not caring at all any more. He would start cutting him self in order to "feel something". He would go to the training center almost daily from the time he got off of school to late at night when the trainer would kick him out cus the trainer needed sleeping time. After training, Jake wouldn't go home. He would find a warm spot in the district somewhere.
Others
Preferred Angles :(Innocent, Sexy, Mysterious.. etc..) Sarcastic, snide,
Angles this tribute will not do: (Max. 3) Innocent, sexy.
Token:If nothing is optional then it'll be it. Just nothing.
Others: Jake may not fear much but what he does fear is his dad. When he's around his dad, his fists curl up and he gets as stiff as a board. He'll barely say anything afterwards for a while when his dad leaves. He'll just keep staring ahead afraid if his dad'll be coming back or not.

Saweet

General
Name: Marty Jimson(First and Last)
Age/Birthday: 15, May 8th
Gender: Male
District: 7
Rich or Poor?: poor
Weapon Of Choice: throwing ax
Personality/Appearance
Physical Appearance: (Must be at least 4 sentences.) He has blond hair and blue eyes. His hair is down past his ears and a bit curly. It alwys seems like he never brushes it or washes it. He stands 5' 4" with a small frame. He has a skinny build due to lack of food.
Personality: (Must be at least 4 sentences.) Marty is a person that always looks on the brighter side of tings even when it comes to the games. He is one that is shy but has a couple of friends. He tries to be nice to everyone that he meets. He will also protect his sister at all costs.
Flaw: (At least 1) His one phisical flaw would be that he walks on a limp on his left foot. since he always looks on the brighter side of things, he doesn't take life too seriously.
Talents:(Must list three) Since he is in district 7, he does have a talent with a throwing ax. It may not be perfect but, it's enough to kill a person if he has to. Sense he has a small frame, he is able to climb trees and fit into small smpaces.
Family/History
Family: (Mother, father, siblings [if any.]) He has a mom and 12 year old sister nmed Willow.
:Sister:
Name-Willow
Age-12
Apearence-Red hair, blue eyes, stands 5'2"
Pets:None
Brief History: (Must be at least 4 sentences.)His dad got killed by a tree when Marty was only 12 years old. As a result, his mom has been having to take up two jobs. That left Marty to take care of his little sister Willow. The limp was the result of a tree cutting accadent.
Others Uh...Nope
Preferred Angles :(Innocent, Sexy, Mysterious.. etc..) Enerjetic, happy
Angles this tribute will not do: (Max. 3) Sexy, Sarcastic
Token: Heart shapped stone his dad found in the woods
Other: Uh...that's pretty much it

Marty is accepted! But I just thought you might want to know since you used the word so often- sense means like the fives senses (hearing, sight, taste, etc.) and since means due to or because, so in the case of your usage of the word the correct spelling would be since. He's still accepted, no problem. I'm just making a note. Also, you changed his sister's name from Willow to Lilly at one point, but that's fine.

General
Name: (First and Last) Magnolia Twill
Age/Birthday: 15 January 3rd.
Gender: Female
District:11
Rich or Poor?: Poor
Weapon Of Choice: Boomarang
Personality/Appearance
Physical Appearance: (Must be at least 4 sentences.) She has red hair and freckles. She is 5'2" and has a small frame. She has a small hallow face from lack of food. Her eyes are green with brown in them.
Personality: (Must be at least 4 sentences.)-She's a shy quiet girl. She does sometimes say the right things at the wrong time or vise versa. She likes to help out people that need it. She likes to pretend that she can fly.
Flaw: (At least 1) She doesn't easily make friends. She's small from lack of food.
Talents:(Must list three) For being small, she can hide in small spaces. She can climb high places. She runs silently and fast.
Family/History
Family: (Mother, father, siblings [if any.])She is an only child. She has her mom.
Pets: Yes, a grey cat
Brief History: (Must be at least 4 sentences.)She grew up on the poor side of town her whole life. Her mom has been working in the fields sense she could remember. Her dad was killed for a crime that he didn't commit. She found her grey cat Mist ehen she was 5 in the orchards looking for scraps.
Others
Preferred Angles :(Innocent, Sexy, Mysterious.. etc..)Mysterious, maybe like a little school girl?
Angles this tribute will not do: (Max. 3)Sexy sarcastic.
Token: No token
Other:

Accepted!

Name: (First and Last) Jaden Hanson
Age/Birthday: 14, September 9th
Gender: Female
District:1
Rich or Poor: Rich
Weapon Of Choice: Bow/Arrows
Physical Appearance: (Must be at least 4 real sentences.) She has a small frame and is tall for her age. She stands about 5’7” and weighs around 120 pounds. Her hair is down to her shoulders, is darkish blond almost brown and grows in curls. She has a tan compplection and green eyes. Most people would remember her by the large scar across her forehead from a training accsadent she had when she was 12. She likes to keep her hair pined up because it interferes with her training.
Personality: (Must be at least 4 real sentences.) Jaden is very curious. She’s a smart girl that loves to learn. If she’s not training, you could find her in town, reading a book or observing something. Her hobbies include drawing, reading and people watching. She has a few people that she likes to talk to. She is someone who is a bit shy but somehow makes friends easily.
Flaw: (At least 1) She’s a bit gullible and a follower which can get her in trouble sometimes.
Talents: (Must list three, but no more than five) She’s good at climbing and using a bow and arrow. She’s also quick on her feet and can jump high.
Family: (Mother, father, siblings [if any.]) She has a mom and dad. She is an only child.
Pets: (Optional) She has a small scruffy looking dog with brown eyes and a white tip on her tail. Her dog’s name is Cloey.
Brief History: (Must be at least 4 sentences.) She grew up in the rich side of town her whole life. Her mom lived in the poor side of town and married her father who was from the rich side of town. Jaden has been training sense she was 7. She did have a brother who died in the 29th hunger games or so.
Preferred Angles: (Innocent, Sexy, Mysterious.. etc..) Mysterious and innocent.
Angles this tribute will not do: (Max. 3) Sexy, brutal, she’s not really good at that.
Token: (Optional)
Other:

Spoiler:

Jaden is accepted! But, um... if she were 5'7" and only 100 pounds she would be super skinny. Not really in any shape to train. Juuusst saying.

Ya. Thanks I shall change her weight to like 120 or something.

Okay, thanks! Yeah, that's healthy and still with a small frame.

Well, it's smallish. So yeah.

Name: (First and Last) Rin Emerson
Age/Birthday: 16, March 3rd
Gender: Female
District: 12
Rich or Poor: poor.
Weapon Of Choice:A knife.
Physical Appearance: (Must be at least 4 real sentences.) She stands five feet and three inches tall. She has a small frame. Her auborn colored hair is shoulder length and feels like straw. Her eyes are blue and her forehead has lots of freckles. She has a large scar across her forehead probably from being pushed around.
Personality: (Must be at least 4 real sentences.)
Rin is a stubborn girl that's not afraid to speak her opinion. She can come off as snappy sometimes because she is afraid of tearing down walls that she has built up for years. Instead of crying, if she ends up getting mad or upset, you wouldn't know it. She would hide somewhere then cry her eyes out at night. She finds comfort in cats, the only thing she knows that she can trust. She has a lot of trust issues.
Flaw: (At least 1) She tends to get paranoid over little things.
Talents: (Must list three, but no more than five) Due to her history, Rin knows how to defend herself. She can climb well. She's not great but good with a knife.
Family/history-((it sort of falls into the same catagory. If that's okay.))- Abandon at age 2, she spent most of her life in an orphanage. Most of her life or...least sense she was 5, she was beat up by the other kids and pushed around. Because of this, she became an outcast and barely spoke to anyone. She was adopted at age 8. The family that took care of her, beat her mentally and physically. She ran away from that homeat age 12. She has been fending for her self sense then. All of this, the experience at the orphanage and the abuse has caused her to build up walls and not trust anyone.
Preferred Angles: (Innocent, Sexy, Mysterious.. etc..)Sarcastic and brutal.
Angles this tribute will not do:Innoscent. charming.(Max. 3)
Token: (Optional)
Other:

Rin is accepted! (YEAH CATS WHOO )

Name: (First and Last) Kenya Clemons
Age/Birthday: Age-18 Birthday-June 3
Gender: Female
District:4
Rich or Poor: Poor
Weapon Of Choice: Throwing Ax
Physical Appearance: (Must be at least 4 real sentences.) She stands about 5’7” and has frizzy blond hair.  She ways about 140 and is kind of fit but has a bit of belly on her.  She has one leg which is shorter then the other which causes her to walk on a limp. Her middle, index, and smallest finger are crooked due to a birth defect.
Personality: (Must be at least 4 real sentences.)  She’s a woman who used to be confident but has lost that sense her husband died in a previous games.  Now a days sense her husband died leaving her to be a single mother, she tends to be with drawn always keeping to her self and taking care of her 8 month old son named Leoni.
Flaw: (At least 1)-When she walks, she walks on a limp which as I explained above is because one leg is shorter then the other.  She suffers from flashbacks.
Talents: (Must list three, but no more than five) She’s really good with a throwing ax and from being in district 4, she’s good at swimming.  She’s good in hand to hand combat as well.
Family: (Mother, father, siblings [if any.]) Her parents died.  She has a 13 year old sister named Jasmine who she also thinks as a second child.  She also has a son who is almost 1 year old. His name is Leoni.
Pets: (Optional) None
Brief History: (Must be at least 4 sentences.) When she was 15 years old, she found her parents murdered in cold blood laying on the ground of her living room when she came home from school.  It left her to take care of her 10 year old sister. Despite her depression though, she managed to find a job. 2 years past and that’s when she met her husband.  Sadly, he died 2 years later leaving her with a baby and her sister.  This made her become with drawn.
Preferred Angles: (Innocent, Sexy, Mysterious.. etc..)  Innocent, mysterious
Angles this tribute will not do: (Max. 3) brutal, sexy
Token: (Optional) Her wedding ring
Others- ((Wasn’t sure where to put this)) As a result of seeing her parents murdered and seeing her husband get killed, she often finds her self up at late hours at night often getting little to no sleep.  She would suffer from flashbacks during night and day.

Kenya is accepted.

Thanks XD. I'm not sure thow where to put thst she suffers from flash backs a lack of sleep?

Other? Persona/history?

Okay. I'll think about it and let you know.

Kenya needs, two more sentences in the persona and she should be alright