Angelicious's character

Name: Angelica Bourne
Age/Birthday:17
Gender:Female
District:4
Family: A mother and 2 sisters
Brief History: Father drowned while diving for clams, leaving Angelica to care for family. Every day at night, she went outside to fish, hidden by a bush that formed a sort of cave so peacekeepers couldnt see her. since peacekeepers could see a fishing pole, she learned to use a net of clear fibers to trap the fish, then use a crossbow to shoot the fish and grab the net when the peacekeepers look away. She kept her family alive.
Physical Appearance: (Must be at least 4 sentences.) with jet black hair, snow white skin and green eyes, she was the beauty of district 4. her body was shapely and her lips were full. though she spoke kindly, her eyes shined with cruelness and ruthlessness.they were said to be inherited from her dad, who did all sorts of evil things, but deep down, she knew that it it was herself that inspired the cold look in her eyes. shew yearned for the death of all in the capital.
Personality: kind on the outside, cold on the inside, many people describe her as mysterious. she is also cunning and ruthless.in school, she gets straight A's and she has many friends, though she is only loyal to her best friend, rhianna. otherwise, she is untrustable. Nobody knows this though. everybody wants to be best friend of Angelica Bourne.
Flaw: (At least 1) coldness in her eyes, 3 scars on her left shoulder.
Pets: a dog named Shine
Talents: (Must list at least three.)Climbing, shooting with crossbow, wrestling
Preferred Angles (Innocent, Sexy, Mysterious.. etc..): Mysterious, Dark, Untouchable
Angles this tribute will not do (Max. 3): Innocent, Fragile, sweet
Other:

That's a really good first character! But by flaw, it means a personality flaw. It wouldn't be the coldness in her eyes, or the 3 scars on her left shoulder. That would describe her appearance, not her flaw.
Judging by her personality, Angelica's flaw would probably be... that she has a hard time trusting people, other then her best friend, and that she's ruthless and cruel in the arena.
So, just change that and myself, or another mod/admin will accept her!

Pip, what did I tell you in the mod meeting? Don't nit pick. It's also not supposed to be a personality flaw really more of a battle flaw. Like an Achilles heel, you know? We all have one.

Yea, I know snori, but that really isn't a flaw at all. Scar's never hurt anyone.

ok
flaw: her ruthlessness and cruelty could easily be the reason she might die.
is that good?